Thread:Bo713/@comment-4555310-20130206142312/@comment-4532491-20130227040208

Wow, I almost forgot to check the forum! Lol. Anyways, your story's good, but not exactly official. There's a bit of 1st person in there, and since you're doing 3rd person, it doesn't fit. And there's an emoticon in there, ever read a book with emoticons in them? Lol. Other than that, I like it. The show reference was good lol. And yes Clone, you HAVE to put it up. Jacen GhostArx (Comlink) 04:02, February 27, 2013 (UTC)